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PhotoShoot Doujinshi Ch2 Cover by Cassy-F-E PhotoShoot Doujinshi Ch2 Cover by Cassy-F-E
this is even better than the doujis cover heheh
the whole purpose of this douji is to get better at drawing
Am I really improving? :/

Let me know what you think of the cover and the doujinshi so far! :D :heart:
I'm so excited for the next chapter!! :w00t:


Cover:
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Chapter 2 Cover: You Are Here!
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Chapter 3 Cover:

Chapter 3 Pages: [link]

Chapter 4 Cover:


Story By: :iconsmiebig:

En Espaņol
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Dad: so you have finally read those anatomy books I bought you
Me: ummm
(I'm thankful that he thinks that nudity is art)
this reminds me of when we went to the Louvre :heart: last year
my dad kept talking about those naked statues for like the whole day... anatomy structure pft!

my tablet has been going crazy latley so I used my dads instead XD
my dad has some weird designing programs that Ive never heard of in my whole entire life

I asked him if he could help me with drawing Narutos torso and he was like Noooooooooooooooo I have work to do (watch news) as usual *sigh*

I hate asking my dad what he thinks of my drawings
he only says nice things because im his daughter *sigh*

He still thinks that I'm lying to him about not being able to draw females :/
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Well, this is my 1st critique so I hope this will help you.~

1st of all, I choose this as my 1st critique as I was attracted by its colour~ It lets me fell confortable and relaxing. The mixing of colours are great too!
But there's still a little weekness in it. I think Naruto's clothes and Sasuke's clothes colour should be more contrast. For example Red and green, blue and orange or yellow and purple.

2nd:
The characters are well drawn, especially the face. :love: Eg: The lenght of the hands, palm, etc. It would be perfect if Naruto's jeens have more wrinkles. Weee~~ both of them are handsome!!

3rd:
Sorry I had to say this but the potrait of theme is kina.. week a bit. (That's why I put "Vision" rating 2 n 1/2 star..) As the tittle is "Fight". It dosen't give me the fighting atmosphere once I see this cover. Well, I haven't read the Doujin so if the Doujin is able to potrait something about fighting, then its alright. :love:

If this Doujin is for selling purpose, then.. maybe changing the cover/change tittle would be better.
(*P/s: If its for selling purpose, I hope you won't repeat the same mistake like me, I hope someoen won't fall into the venus fly trap like me..)

Gambateh!! :love:
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fokkykat Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Can't remember if I posted a comment, sorry, but I thought this cover was done awesomely.^___^ Both men look very nice and I love the colors. Great job!
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MomoAbyss Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Their faces are perfect <3
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AcrylicHeart Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Writer
Naruto is so cute here~! I love the little detail of the chain at his waist. I love when people can take something small like a wallet and integrate it into a character. It really develops the drawing more as a whole, I think, and breathes life into the whole thing. I also greatly enjoy the wrinkling on the shirts and the shading as well. So well done, as always~ I definitely see some improvement! 8D
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GG-BOY Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:heart:____________:heart: You are just too awesome! Thank you so much for making the beginning of this year great!
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NarutoNineTaleFox Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Artist
Cool
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Cassy-F-E Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanx!
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NarutoNineTaleFox Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student Artist
Ur welcome ^^
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Pandoras-Box-of-Art Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't wait for the next page on 5th sep. :la: naruto looks so freaking hot in this pic!!! and i love the clothes they're adorable!
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Cassy-F-E Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you!! :D
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LoveToTheCucumber Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't pretend like you don't like each other ;D
Sasuke's face is a little funny in this picture. But not bad at all. Naruto is perfect :iconlawooplz:
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