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PhotoShoot Doujinshi Ch2 Coverby *Cassy-F-E

Fan Art / Manga & Anime / Digital / Fan Comics

this is even better than the doujis cover heheh
the whole purpose of this douji is to get better at drawing
Am I really improving? :/

Let me know what you think of the cover and the doujinshi so far!

I'm so excited for the next chapter!!

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Dad: so you have finally read those anatomy books I bought you
Me: ummm
(I'm thankful that he thinks that nudity is art)
this reminds me of when we went to the Louvre

last year
my dad kept talking about those naked statues for like the whole day... anatomy structure pft!

my tablet has been going crazy latley so I used my dads instead XD
my dad has some weird designing programs that Ive never heard of in my whole entire life

I asked him if he could help me with drawing Narutos torso and he was like Noooooooooooooooo I have work to do (watch news) as usual *sigh*

I hate asking my dad what he thinks of my drawings
he only says nice things because im his daughter *sigh*

He still thinks that I'm lying to him about not being able to draw females :/

Critique by ~freezingfeathers Jan 6, 2012, 6:23:04 AM

Well, this is my 1st critique so I hope this will help you.~

1st of all, I choose this as my 1st critique as I was attracted by its colour~ It lets me fell confortable and relaxing. The mixing of colours are great too!
But there's still a little weekness in it. I think Naruto's clothes and Sasuke's clothes colour should be more contrast. For example Red and green, blue and orange or yellow and purple.

2nd:
The characters are well drawn, especially the face.

Eg: The lenght of the hands, palm, etc. It would be perfect if Naruto's jeens have more wrinkles. Weee~~ both of them are handsome!!

3rd:
Sorry I had to say this but the potrait of theme is kina.. week a bit. (That's why I put "Vision" rating 2 n 1/2 star..) As the tittle is "Fight". It dosen't give me the fighting atmosphere once I see this cover. Well, I haven't read the Doujin so if the Doujin is able to potrait something about fighting, then its alright.

If this Doujin is for selling purpose, then.. maybe changing the cover/change tittle would be better.
(*P/s: If its for selling purpose, I hope you won't repeat the same mistake like me, I hope someoen won't fall into the venus fly trap like me..)

Gambateh!!

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